Here's a site I made - http://www.ido-weddingz.com
> How does it look?


http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-weddingz.c\
om%2F
some errors need fixing

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-weddingz.com%2F&ss=1&\
amp;outline=1
ditto

Do not like the font on the menu .. its too rough

Centering text makes it harder to read because the starting position of each
line changes, forcing the reader to work harder to find where each line
begins to continue reading and can cause potential difficulties for persons
with low-vision using screen enlargers. English and most European languages
are read from left to right. Centered text is very hard to read and follow,
because it's not how people normally read text. Only Headings or subheadings
should be centred if necessary, to give emphasis to the heading.

I would not have an external link on the homepage put that on a links page

You need a focus .. till I hit the prices page I did not realise that you
actually don't do weddings ... what you do is play music at them ... doing
weddings is organising them .. you need to make that more obvious ..perhaps
the menu graphics should have given me a clue but it didnt and i didnt read
the text very closley because its centered .. and annoying ...

Your title on your homepage needs to be

Wedding Music Services

or something along those keyword lines ...

your heading 1 tag needs to be instead of Home

the exact same as your page title...

you NEED a hell of a lot more content and some graphics would not go amiss

oh no ... I disabled images in Firefox to see what happens to your menu ...
and it disappeared ... I can still click on something because when i mouse
over i see the cursor mouse in a hand BUT ... i dont see what i am clicking
on .... not nice .... you need text links along the bottom ....

having some testomonials would help with this site too

you should protect your email addy too

nice start but change the font on the menu ... make it accessible fix the
coding errors and add images and content and left align your text add a
copyright and work with your seo more...

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hth Tina
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