--- In SiteCheck@yahoogroups.com, "TinaClarke" <TinaClarke@...> wrote:
>
> Here's a site I made - http://www.ido-weddingz.com
> > How does it look?
>
>
>
http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-weddingz.c\
om%2F

> some errors need fixing
>
>
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-weddingz.com%2F&amp;ss=1&\
amp;outline=1

> ditto
>
> Do not like the font on the menu .. its too rough
>
> Centering text makes it harder to read because the starting position
of each
> line changes, forcing the reader to work harder to find where each line
> begins to continue reading and can cause potential difficulties for
persons
> with low-vision using screen enlargers. English and most European
languages
> are read from left to right. Centered text is very hard to read and
follow,
> because it's not how people normally read text. Only Headings or
subheadings
> should be centred if necessary, to give emphasis to the heading.
>
> I would not have an external link on the homepage put that on a
links page
>
> You need a focus .. till I hit the prices page I did not realise
that you
> actually don't do weddings ... what you do is play music at them ...
doing
> weddings is organising them .. you need to make that more obvious
..perhaps
> the menu graphics should have given me a clue but it didnt and i
didnt read
> the text very closley because its centered .. and annoying ...
>
> Your title on your homepage needs to be
>
> Wedding Music Services
>
> or something along those keyword lines ...
>
> your heading 1 tag needs to be instead of Home
>
> the exact same as your page title...
>
> you NEED a hell of a lot more content and some graphics would not go
amiss
>
> oh no ... I disabled images in Firefox to see what happens to your
menu ...
> and it disappeared ... I can still click on something because when i
mouse
> over i see the cursor mouse in a hand BUT ... i dont see what i am
clicking
> on .... not nice .... you need text links along the bottom ....
>
> having some testomonials would help with this site too
>
> you should protect your email addy too
>
> nice start but change the font on the menu ... make it accessible
fix the
> coding errors and add images and content and left align your text add a
> copyright and work with your seo more...
>
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>
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>
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> hth Tina
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OK thanks so much! I justified the text, and am going to fix the rest
of the stuff this week. Again, I appreciate the help greatly.