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Subject: Re: "I Do" Weddingz
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--- In SiteCheck@yahoogroups.com, "TinaClarke" <TinaClarke@...> wrote:
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> Here's a site I made - http://www.ido-weddingz.com
> > How does it look?
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>
http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?uri=3Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-wed=
dingz.com%2F

> some errors need fixing
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>
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=3Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.ido-weddingz.com%2F&am=
p;ss=3D1&outline=3D1

> ditto
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> Do not like the font on the menu .. its too rough
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> Centering text makes it harder to read because the starting position
of each=20
> line changes, forcing the reader to work harder to find where each line=20
> begins to continue reading and can cause potential difficulties for
persons=20
> with low-vision using screen enlargers. English and most European
languages=20
> are read from left to right. Centered text is very hard to read and
follow,=20
> because it's not how people normally read text. Only Headings or
subheadings=20
> should be centred if necessary, to give emphasis to the heading.
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> I would not have an external link on the homepage put that on a
links page
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> You need a focus .. till I hit the prices page I did not realise
that you=20
> actually don't do weddings ... what you do is play music at them ...
doing=20
> weddings is organising them .. you need to make that more obvious
..perhaps=20
> the menu graphics should have given me a clue but it didnt and i
didnt read=20
> the text very closley because its centered .. and annoying ...
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> Your title on your homepage needs to be
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> Wedding Music Services
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> or something along those keyword lines ...
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> your heading 1 tag needs to be instead of Home
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> the exact same as your page title...
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> you NEED a hell of a lot more content and some graphics would not go
amiss
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> oh no ... I disabled images in Firefox to see what happens to your
menu ...=20
> and it disappeared ... I can still click on something because when i
mouse=20
> over i see the cursor mouse in a hand BUT ... i dont see what i am
clicking=20
> on .... not nice .... you need text links along the bottom ....
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> having some testomonials would help with this site too
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> you should protect your email addy too
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> nice start but change the font on the menu ... make it accessible
fix the=20
> coding errors and add images and content and left align your text add a=20
> copyright and work with your seo more...
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> I highly recommended Cricket's Free SEO (search engine optimisation)
Classes
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> class registration.
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> hth Tina
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>

OK thanks so much! I justified the text, and am going to fix the rest
of the stuff this week. Again, I appreciate the help greatly.

Sun Dec 7, 2008 8:15 pm

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