Dear haiku friends, Here are the poems entered in the current Kigo kukai, where our subject was "Blossom(s)". Blossom, when species is not specified, is...
Dear haiku friends, Here are the poems entered in the current Free Format kukai, where our subject was "Pawprints / Hoofprints / animal tracks". The haiku are...
George, Nice job of giving fresh content to a familiar expression. Bill Kenney erie_st48 <erie_st48@...> wrote: senior moment: i plant for someone else ...
ditto ... ... From: "parsons edward" <wamsetta@...> To: <haikulive@yahoogroups.com> Sent: Tuesday, May 03, 2005 3:09 PM Subject: Re: [haikulive] old...
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Thaks, Edward Bill parsons edward <wamsetta@...> wrote: bravo... ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam?...
Dear haiku-friends, Firstly, an announcement please: We'd like to give a huge thank you to Gary Warner, our host of The Shiki Monthly Kukai in its home on ...
This is a memory haiku (or senryu; I'll let you decide), but it's also seasonal. My 50th class reunion (Boston College, Class of 1954) took place last spring....
Hi Bill! ... I like your haiku, but wonder maybe as it is so strong it could work even better without "recognizing"? Without the headnote it would obviously...
Hi Alan, I fully agree with your point regarding the headnote. I only included it on the principle of "full disclosure." That is, acknowledging that a year...
Hi Bill! ... I'm not sure why you feel to do any kind of full disclosure, the haiku was good and clear, and it doesn't matter when the experience was to the...
Alan, Thanks again. Re: "recognizing," I'm thinking it over. Bill Alan Summers <asummers@...> wrote: Hi Bill! ... I'm not sure why you feel to do any...
Just thought I'd weigh in too ... I think "recognizing" belongs right were it is! It's the central process that's going on in the poem. Why remove it? Mike ...
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Hi! Nice to see so much activity on haikulive. Various comments through the messages... ... There is nothing 'wrong' with "recognising", but with haiku we...
In following Bill Kenney's relaxed and accessible way of communicating, in my humble opinion I think that "recognizing" should be kept in. ... === message...
Hi! ... You could be right! Thanks Bill for your haiku and the discussion that came out of it, mucho appreciated! all my best, Alan city garden cafe a robin...
Thanks for your comment, Mike. As a fellow haikuist said to me via e-mail the other day, "Writing haiku means never having to say you're finished." Bill Clear...
I never expected my modest little haiku (A reader somewhere else complained that it might as well be put on a postcard.) to generate so much comment, but I'm...
My, how this has grown. Edward, I'm flattered that you find in my work a "way of communicating." Bill parsons edward <wamsetta@...> wrote: In following...
Alan, In case you haven't heard, there's a kukai calling for haiku that include the word "robin," entires due May 14, no entry fee. You can get details at...
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