Oh wonderfully done Bill, thank you:) yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best...
Comments are welcome. thank you A single tear- on the petal of a rose which also falls. yvonne myers 2005 ____________________________________________________ ...
Dear Bill how free and alive this haiku is:) thank you yvonne ... ____________________________________________________ Start your day with Yahoo! - make it...
she moved the branches back to reveal the big catapillar Bill Kenney <bilkny@...> wrote: raising the glass to set the spider free— summer breeze ...
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pouring on the trail two naked people walking Edward Parsons <mtsandrivers@...> wrote: she moved the branches back to reveal the big catapillar Bill...
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hi yvonne, ... Not sure why you have put a dash after tear? I like the poem as it is, without a dash. If you insist, even with the Upper Case and period (full...
I'm not sure about your reply could you please explain it to me? thank you yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired...
Dear Alan I will kept that upper case and period and work on that dash*l* and I really like how you started yours with lavender afternoon. Thank you for your...
Yvonne: Thank you so much for this comment. Bill Yvonne Myers <yvonne_m_94301@...> wrote: Dear Bill how free and alive this haiku is:) thank you yvonne ...
... To "jw", is your three line comment a reply "haiku"? What a shame you cannot be more constructive. ***** To Yvonne, from the dash, you appear to have...
hi yvonne, hi andrea, I do like andrea's comments, and although I do not 'always' subscribe to very short haiku, I do like the haiku version because it uses...
It's strange how every time I send to haikulive, I get a postmaster reply saying that it didn't go through, and yet it did. Thought I'd let you know. Ed Alan...
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broken levy broken promises sorry, Martin Bill Kenney <bilkny@...> wrote: chemotherapy— she always liked the way I kissed her hair Bill Kenney ...
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Dear Andrea, I can not tell you how happy I am to read your comments and I thank you very much for your time and thoughts. I have copied them and will be...
Oh Bill this is so powerful, thank you yvonne ... ____________________________________________________ Start your day with Yahoo! - make it your home page ...
thank you for mentioning this, I get two messages one with all sorts of strange marks on it and the other in my bulk mail saying this message did not go...
thank you Alan, and once again to you andrea I do like comments and discussions:) A supportive comment a little help along the way is so nice:)and seeing what ...
hi Ed, and Yvonne, I do too, but I get messages both in English and Chinese. I can't tell if it is Cantonese, Mandarin, or Shanghai dialect, perhaps there is...
chemotherapy— she always liked the way I kissed her hair Bill Kenney _http://haiku-usa.blogspot.com_ (http://haiku-usa.blogspot.com) abortion clinic -- the...
Comments are welcome. thank you A single tear- on the petal of a rose which also falls. yvonne myers 2005 Yvonne, I think that the previous comment was...
MtlAfrodisia@... wrote: Comments are welcome. thank you A single tear- on the petal of a rose which also falls. yvonne myers 2005 Yvonne, I think that the...
Oh you have some wonderful ideas John. If I may contiune this discussion a bit, haiku has many elements within. There are such things as metaphor, even though...
Thank you Bill for your comments:) If it means anything when I wrote this poem I was thinking of the human tear and the beauty of the rose or the sadness in...
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