I agree with Bill, I like to respond to poetry with what their work made my minds eye see, but their works are still their works. Enjoy someone's work, create...
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Feb 1, 2006 12:25 pm
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this never stopped anyone in the WHC from baking haiku cookies: . . . just a different way to say...
Personally I don't like spoken/poetry competitions. A few years ago I read some literature of Tracy Morris who won a Haiku Slam in 97. I said what!? Is...
Dear Bill that's right:) thank you yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam...
hush at dusk ... the clatter of a leaf falling endless sky ... a gust of wind sweeps through a wheat field lightning ... the glow of pine-sap from a split limb...
Dear John all very good, thank you yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam...
Hi John: Yes "clatter" is just right, and a bit daring, in the "hush." The pine-sap image is striking, and the crane comes vividly to life. I wonder if you...
Hi John: Yes "clatter" is just right, and a bit daring, in the "hush." The pine-sap image is striking, and the crane comes vividly to life. I wonder if you...
Thank you, Yvonne. While I aim for clarity, I hope there's occasionally an aura of suggestiveness, permitting multiple readings. Best, Bill Yvonne Myers...
FEBRUARY 2006 KUKAI ... VOTING PHASE -- Only participating poets may vote! We have now reached the VOTING phase of the February Kukai. The submitted poems have...
Dear Bill oh a really fun one, good! thank you yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the...
old woman's house -- wanting to pick the icicles only youth -- such a crisp crunch of leaves prayer silence a child interupts -- I'm hungry These haiku where...
... Dear eye_mage san These are only my small opinions: there seems good feeling in all, but, without the supporting words and structure. If you will allow, I...
Good Day, I appreciate your feedback. I'm a desk haijin unfortunately. My best work have been produced within workshops. Haiku workshops are hard to come...
Excuse me, the idea of showing not telling comes from Ezra Pound when he shared this view of his he was not writing about haiku. There are many things that...
Dear Tyrone and Yvonne I did not know that about Ezra Pound, though, when I was taught haiku through the WHCbeginners online workshop, this was "Pound"ed into...
That's very interesting Dennis. I would say around 1902 this was Pound's era, the imagists that wrote make each word count and so on, the "new" haiku was ...
Dear Bill very sweet:) thank you yvonne ... __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam...
friends, in my short time of discovering and writing haiku, as well as tanka and a few others styles, i have yet to try renku. i assume most of you that write...