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How To Write Sales-Making Headlines and Text * February 23, 2000   Message List  
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IN THIS ISSUE
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1. "How To Write Sales-Making Headlines and Text"
by J. R. Beach
3. February Special(s) - Advertising - 75% off!
4. Tip(s) - "Success Story: Your Own Poll" by Dr. Nunley
5. Webmaster Selections - Ad-Writing Articles
6. Featured Ezines - you'll have to see these
7. Subscriber Link - Amy's Albums
8. Discreet Classifieds
9. Who We Are - Contact Information


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>From the Editor...
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Hello Subscribers and welcome to another issue of
Webmaster Tips Weekly!

Freshen up your internet marketing with some articles
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1. "How To Write Sales-Making Headlines and Text"
by J. R. Beach
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How long does it take to make a first impression? On the
fast-paced internet you’re likely to get less than 15
seconds. That’s all they’ll spend on your opening page
unless you grab visitors with something that interests
them.

And if you’ve spent effort and dollars to attract visitors,
you don’t want to lose them in the time it takes to back
out of the driveway. After all, if you’ve got something to
sell, you’re not looking for “hits”, you’re looking for
sales. The only item someone will buy in fifteen seconds
is a face-value ticket to the Super Bowl.

With the advent of simpler, fast-loading sites with fewer
graphics, headlines and text may be the most important
tools you have during those 15 seconds.

Headlines
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The objective of a headline is to interest the visitor in
reading the text. Plain and simple. Without a well-written
headline, visitors will never go far enough to investigate
the details of what you’ve got to offer. You don’t sell
with a headline. That’s the job of your text. All you want
to do is get the reader to desire more information.

--Choose the right words
First, certain subjects create more interest than others.
Among the most effective are money, wealth, love, health
and safety. Practice writing three or four headlines using
those subjects.

There are also words that seem to attract greater interest
than others. Here are some of those words:
Learn, discover, easy, new, proven, save, you, now and
free

Now re-write your headlines incorporating those words.

And, of course, many effective headlines start with
“How to…” or “How you can…”

--Use a question
Many times a question works well because it involves the
reader. Ever heard this one? “Where Do You Want To Go
Today?” Sure you have.

Here are some other ways to incorporate a question into
your headline:
“Have You Ever…?”
“Do You Want To…”
“Do You Think You Can…”
“How Do You…”


--Experiment with your headlines
Chances are, you’re not going to hit the best possible
headline on your first try. And nobody can tell you in
advance what will work for your product or service. Don’t
be afraid to experiment early on, trying to gauge response
to each headline.

--Put a tracking system in place
Make sure you have a system in place to track which
headlines are generating response and which aren’t. An
easy way is to make multiple, identical pages on your site.
Each page should contain a hit counter. Then assign each
headline you use to a particular page. The highest number
of responses wins. Headline one might be
www.yourdomainname.com/product/hd1.html and the second
headline aims visitors to
www.yourdomainname.com/product/hd2.html.


Writing Effective Website Text
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Now that you’ve perfected your headline, you should tailor
your text to involve the visitor in your site, describe
what your product or service will do for them and lead them
toward a sale. Here are some DOs and DON’Ts:

--Highlight Benefits
People don’t respond to features, they respond to benefits
(what the product or service will DO for them or how it
will make them FEEL). Therefore, turning the product’s
features into benefits is critical. For example, people
aren’t interested in a six-cylinder, turbo charged
280-horsepower engine. That’s a car’s feature. They are,
however, interested in driving a car with quick
acceleration to merge swiftly into highway traffic, pass
slow-moving trucks on two-lane roads, etc. Those are the
benefits of the engine. So stress benefits. Here’s an
easy way to do that:

W T M T Y I

A technique I’ve used for years to help turn features into
benefits, WTMTYI is an abbreviation for “what that means
to you is…”. For every feature your product has, think
“what that means to you is…” and complete the sentence.
You’ll have a benefit. “This quality vehicle has a
turbo-charged six that generates 280 horsepower (and what
that means to you is) You’ll have plenty of power to
maneuver in traffic and enough acceleration to feel
comfortable motoring onto the expressway, and that’s
important, don’t you think?”

--Quality over quantity
It’s not how much you say, it is how well you say it. Less
is better. After you first write your text, go back and
make it tighter. Then do it again. The rationale for doing
this is two-fold: reading a computer screen is harder than
reading from paper and, with one hand on the mouse, your
visitor is prone to use it as soon as he or she feels the
least bit bored.

–-Appeal to emotion rather than logic
Most purchases are made on an emotional level. Remember,
people buy what they WANT, not what they NEED. They buy
because of how the product or service will make them FEEL.
That’s emotion, not logic. Your text, then, should make
them want the product, not insist that they need it. We
need food, water, clothing and shelter. Everything else
is a want.

--Don’t use hype
If they’re smart enough to navigate the web, assume
they’re smart enough to see through hype (and they’ve
likely seen enough of it). If your product or service is
worthy, it doesn’t need hype. Besides, to make repeat or
referral sales, you want to deliver more than you’ve
promised. You can’t do that if you’ve promised the world.

--Avoid incorporating incomprehensible vernacular to
persuade your constituents to purchase (Don’t use big
words to sell) Don’t reach for the Thesaurus in an attempt
to impress your visitor. Text should be easy to read. It
should flow. Don’t use a large word when a smaller one
will do. Please, whatever you do, never write like a
lawyer or the guys who write user’s manuals.

--Use proper grammar
Few things will hurt your credibility as will grammar and
punctuation mistakes. You’ve been to pages containing
misuse of the language. What was your impression? Not
professional, perhaps? No, you don’t have to be an
English professor. Here’s what you can do:
-Use a spell check program. Let it do the work for you.
-Have a friend proof-read your site. Have several friends
proof-read it. If you don’t have any qualified friends,
pay a professional to help you (that’s the cost of having
no literate friends).
-When in doubt, simplify.

There are numerous sources of additional help on website
selling. One of the top sources is
http://www.sitesell.com/andersoncreations.html operated
by Ken Evoy, M.D.

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Mr. Beach is a veteran marketer and webmaster of
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on identifying guaranteed business opportunities and
offers a unique three step money-making process.
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4. Tip(s) - Success Story: Your Own Poll
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People and media both love polls. Create your own
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AND have a good chance of getting covered by the media.

John Kernell of TheGeezerBrigade.com operates a monthly
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Kernell posts results on his site, then releases them to
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Kernell gets lots of traffic and new members from all
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Joe Shafran, PR agent to top CEOs, authors, and
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with the media.

If you don't have any earthshaking news to announce,
create a poll and announce the results on talk radio,
in ezines, and to your local newspaper.

Make it easy for people to respond. Don't ask too many
personal questions. That reduces response.

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